2. fetal development
3. fetal heartbeat
4. fetal gender
5. fetal position
6. placenta location
7. fetal anatomy
8. amniotic fluid volume
9. umbilical cord (around the neck)
10. in breach position
11. pregnancy checkup
12. Doppler machine
13. hemoglobin
14. midwife
15. phase
16. gestation
17. gestational diabetes
18. triple-screen test
19. abnormal results
20. throw up
21. vomit
22. genetic
23. incredible
24. nauseous
25. prenatal
26. postnatal
27. Down syndrome
28. morning sickness
29. routine tests
30. trimestser
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回覆刪除My cousin has been pregnant for 2 months. Today, she went to the hospital for an ultrasound examination and amniocentesis examination. It was found that the fetal position and the fetus may have Down syndrome. However, the fetal development and fetal heart sound are normal. The cousin mysteriously asked the doctor why there was a possibility of Down syndrome. The doctor explained, "This disease is not hereditary, but a problem with chromosomes." The cousin asked if there was any way to solve it. The doctor said, "Maybe you can consider abortion or stay, This needs your discussion, and it is also found that your blood sugar index is a little high, and you may have gestational diabetes. It is recommended that you do some more blood tests for diagnosis.
Mysteriously?
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回覆刪除Lisa is a 4 months pregnant, today she go to hospital to checkup the fetal development.The first part is ultrasound examination which checkup the fetal gender、fetal position 、fetal location and fetal anatomy. Fortunately, Lisa is examination looks very wonderful,she has no umbilical cord or in breech position. The next part is use Doppler machine to checkup baby’s heartbeat,the baby heartbeat is in the 110 to 160 times/minute, Lisa’s baby is normal. After that, Lisa tell the midwife that she fell nauseous and throw up in the morning, the midwife said it is normal in this phase, so don't worry too much. Lisa felt much more relieved,and appointment the next time’s routine test. She is looking forward to the birth of the baby.
"Lisa is a 4 months pregnant" change to "Lisa is four months pregnant"
刪除"today she go to hospital" change to "Today, she went to the hospital""Fortunately, Lisa is examination looks very wonderful" change to "Fortunately, the results were wonderful"
"The next part is use Doppler machine" change to "Next, a Doppler machine was used"
"Lisa felt much more relieved,and appointment the next time’s routine test" change to "Lisa felt much more relieved and scheduled her next routine checkup"：
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回覆刪除A Routine Pregnancy Checkup
During a routine pregnancy checkup, the expectant mother visited the clinic for an ultrasound examination. The midwife welcomed her warmly and guided her into the examination room, where a Doppler machine was ready to check the fetal heartbeat.
As the ultrasound began, the technician carefully examined the baby’s fetal development. She looked at the fetal anatomy, including the brain, spine, limbs, and internal organs. The technician also measured the amniotic fluid volume to ensure it was within the normal range.
Next, she checked the placenta location, making sure it wasn’t too low, and observed the fetal position. “The baby is not in breach position,” she said, “and the umbilical cord is not around the neck, so everything looks good.”
The mother asked, “Can you tell the fetal gender yet?” The technician smiled and said, “It’s still early in this phase of pregnancy, but I’ll take a look!”
After the scan, the midwife took a blood sample to check hemoglobin levels, ensuring the mother wasn’t anemic. Everything seemed normal, and the mother left feeling reassured and excited for her next visit.
"breach" change to "breech"
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回覆刪除During a pregnancy checkup, doctors use ultrasound examination and a Doppler machine to assess fetal development, fetal position, and the fetal heartbeat. If the baby is found to be in a breech position, close monitoring is required. Routine prenatal tests are also conducted, including screening for gestational diabetes and Down syndrome, to ensure the baby’s health. The entire gestation is divided into three trimesters, each requiring different types of care and attention.
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刪除Lisa is pregnant and goes to the clinic for a pregnancy checkup. The midwife uses a Doppler machine to listen to the fetal heartbeat. Mary also has an ultrasound examination to check the fetal development, fetal position, and placenta location. The doctor tells her that the baby is not in breach position, which is good news.Lisa is in her second trimester. She sometimes feels nauseous and has morning sickness. She often needs to throw up. The doctor does some routine tests, including a blood test to check her hemoglobin level. She also takes the triple-screen test to check for Down syndrome or other genetic problems.
回覆刪除Your name, please?
刪除N: Good morning! How are you feeling today?
回覆刪除P: Not so good… I feel nauseous and I threw up after breakfast.
N: Oh no, that sounds tough. Morning sickness is common in the first trimester, but it’s still hard.
P: I just hope the baby is okay.
N: I understand. Don’t worry ,the doctor will do an ultrasound to check the baby’s heartbeat and development.
P: Will they look at the placenta too?
N: Yes, and we’ll also check the amniotic fluid and see if the baby’s position is normal.
P: I heard the umbilical cord can wrap around the baby’s neck.
N: That’s called a nuchal cord. It happens sometimes, but we’ll keep an eye on it ,most babies are just fine.
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回覆刪除My mom is a three months pregnant that has been experiencing nauseous and vomiting.The midwife told her it is a morning sickness that normal for every pregnant woman to have.
She went to go to the hospital for ultrasound examination that including know fetal development,fetal heartbeat with the Doppler machine,fetal gender,fetal position,fetal anatomy...These results are done to make sure the baby and mother are safe during gestation.
Not only that,my mom needed to doing some routine test that hemoglobin to make sure iron levels are normal.Also can do a triple-screen test to screens for genetic problems.Finished all checkup,the midwife will call my mom if she has any of tests come back with abnormal results.
"My mom is a three months pregnant" change to "My mom is three months pregnant"
刪除"She went to go to the hospital" change to "She went to the hospital""that including know fetal development..." change to "which included checking the fetal development..."
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回覆刪除A:How do you feel recently?
B: I sometime feel vomit that is a normal state?
A:Yes.Now, Let’s do some pregnancy checkup like gestational diabetes test and see your triple-screen test results.
B:It’s all okay?
A: Your result have some abnormal results.
B Oh my god. I am incredible.
A:Your fetal anatomy have Down syndrome genetic.
B:What do l do next?
A:I think you have two chooses. First, take away this fetal. Second, born her and take care.
B:I should have more time to think that.
"I sometime feel vomit that is a normal state?" change to "I sometimes feel nauseous. Is that normal?"
刪除"Your result have some abnormal results." change to "Unfortunately, there are some abnormal results."
During the early stages of gestation, Emily often felt nauseous and would sometimes vomit in the mornings. Her midwife reassured her that morning sickness was common and arranged a prenatal appointment. At the clinic, she had her first ultrasound examination, where she heard the fetal heartbeat for the very first time. It was an emotional moment. The doctor also explained that a genetic screening would be done soon to check for any conditions like Down syndrome. Emily was nervous, but grateful for the support and care she received throughout her pregnancy journey.
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刪除51111132:Alien is gestation.Today she was go to clinic for pregnancy checkup.It is about checkups fetal development,fetal gender,fetal heartbeat and fetal position. This time is Alien first pregnancy.She was worried about baby health so him did triple screen test. After the inspection,she was incredible to hear about baby heartbeat and all examination is normal.But now she feels a little bit nauseous and vomiting.
回覆刪除"Alien is gestation" change to "Alien is pregnant"
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"This time is Alien first pregnancy" change to This is Alien's first pregnancy"
"she was incredible to hear about baby heartbeat" change to "she was amazed to hear the baby’s heartbeat"
The main character is currently pregnant, but since she is already 43 years old, she is considered an advanced maternal age. On top of that, she experienced very severe vomiting during the first trimester, so she places great importance on prenatal tests. She is worried that the baby might have Down syndrome and even more afraid that she might pass on such genetic issues to future generations. After a series of examinations at the hospital, the doctor informed her that the baby is very healthy, but some routine tests will still be needed later on.
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回覆刪除Sarah was in her second trimester and went for her regular pregnancy checkup. The doctor used a Doppler machine to listen to the fetal heartbeat, which was strong and steady. During the ultrasound examination, they saw that the fetal gender was a girl, and her fetal position looked normal. The doctor also checked the amniotic fluid volume and confirmed the placenta location was safe. Sarah had taken the triple-screen test earlier, and thankfully, there were no signs of Down syndrome or other genetic conditions. Although she still felt nauseous sometimes, everything was progressing well.
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回覆刪除Last week, my sister went for a routine pregnancy checkup.
The doctor used a Doppler machine to check the fetal heartbeat, and we were so happy to hear the sound!She also had an ultrasound examination, and we found out the fetal gender — it’s a girl!The doctor said the fetal position looks good and the amniotic fluid volume is normal.They also tested her hemoglobin levels and talked about gestational diabetes to make sure everything is fine.
In the end, the nurse reminded her that morning sickness is normal and gave her tips in case she feels nauseous again.
We’re all excited to meet the baby!
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回覆刪除Pregnancy is a challenging experience. Some people feel nauseous and suffer from severe morning sickness. Regular pregnancy checkups are necessary. Ultrasound examinations, the Doppler machine, and other tests can reveal a lot of information, such as fetal development, heartbeat, position, amniotic fluid volume, and even the baby’s gender.
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刪除I am a pregnant woman and I have been pregnant for two months.This morning I went to go to check up my baby because I have been vomited for a week. The midwife told me that it’s perfectly normal. Then she measured my body weight and hemoglobin,I gain three pounds and everything is fine.After that,I went home and told my husband,we both were happy.
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回覆刪除The patient is in her first trimester of pregnancy. She goes for a pregnancy checkup. The doctor uses a Doppler machine to check the fetal heartbeat. She sees the baby in the ultrasound examination.
The doctor checks the fetal position and fetal gender. The baby is a girl!
The placenta location and amniotic fluid volume are normal.
She takes a triple-screen test, and the results are not abnormal.
She feels nauseous and has morning sickness. The doctor says it’s normal.
He also talks to her about gestational diabetes and healthy food.
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回覆刪除This morning, I was vomiting, and it had been going on for a long time. So, I decided to go to the hospital for a pregnancy checkup to find out what was happening.
The doctor said I needed to do a pregnancy checkup and helped me with an ultrasound examination.
The doctor explained that constantly wanting to throw up is normal and told me not to worry it’s called morning sickness.
He also said I needed to get a triple-screen test to check for Down syndrome.
Then, the doctor used a Doppler machine to listen to the fetal heartbeat. I thought it was incredible.
After that, the doctor reminded me not to forget the routine tests.
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回覆刪除I had a pregnancy checkup last week. They did an ultrasound to see the baby’s heartbeat and development. The doctor said the fetal position and placenta were normal.
I also did some routine tests and checked my hemoglobin. Lately, I feel really nauseous in the mornings—morning sickness is no joke! Luckily, the midwife was really nice.
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回覆刪除My aunt is five months pregnant. She had an ultrasound examination last week. The doctor said the fetal development was good, and we heard the fetal heartbeat. It was amazing.We also found out the fetal gender — it’s a girl! My aunt was happy, but she still has morning sickness and sometimes vomits or throws up in the morning.Later, there were some abnormal results, so the doctor suggested a genetic test. We were a bit worried, but he said it was just to be safe.Now she’s in the sixth month of gestation, and the baby moves a lot. We can’t wait to meet her.
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回覆刪除I’m going to last time routine tests for pregnancy today. I checkup ultrasound examination first,it can know fetal development and fetal position .Midwife tell me fetal position is in breach position so I can’t Natural production.
Use Doppler machine test fetal heartbeat I found baby heart is fast .but I know it is normal.
Next I going to Blood draw check hemoglobin and gestational diabetes .
Doctor tell me my result is normal. I also talk recently felt nauseous and easy tired.Doctor tell me these symptom after postnatal will be fine. They said my baby and I is very healthy.
"these symptom" change to "these symptoms"
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回覆刪除During the pregnancy checkup, the midwife used a Doppler machine to check the fetal heartbeat, fetal gender, and fetal position. She also looked at the placenta location and fetal anatomy. The baby was not in breech position, and the umbilical cord was not around the neck. The amniotic fluid volume was normal, and the phase of pregnancy was healthy.
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回覆刪除My mom has a friend she is pregnant. She recently went for a checkup and shared it with us. The doctor first used a doppler machine to check the fetal heartbeat and said it was normal. The fetal position was head position , and there were no abnormal. Mom’s friend said she’s been feeling throw up lately, and the doctor said it’s just morning sickness and don’t worry about that .The doctor also reminded her to come in for a tripe-screen test and prenatal assessment the future.The mom’s friend felt very reassured and is thinking about having this doctor midwife baby.
"she is pregnant" change to "who is pregnant"
刪除"head position" change to "head-down"
"no abnormal" change to "no abnormalities"
"feeling throw up" change to "feeling like throwing up"
"don’t worry about that" change to "not to worry about it"
"tripe-screen test" change to "triple-screen test"
"this doctor midwife baby" change to "this doctor or midwife deliver her baby"
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回覆刪除I had a pregnancy checkup today. The midwife used a Doppler machine to check the fetal heartbeat. It was strong!I also had an ultrasound examination. The fetal position is normal—not in breech position. The amniotic fluid volume is fine.I did routine tests for gestational diabetes. Everything seems okay!
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回覆刪除Many prenatal women always go through with morning sickness and feel nauseous. If you want to know about the baby's health , you cau do routine tests .Like hemoglobin test to make sure that your iron levels are normal or take blood test to check for gestational diabete. Also We can do a trip-screen test that screens for genetic problems. Finally you can do Doppler machine to see baby fetal heartbeat.
"gestational diabete" change to "gestational diabetes"
刪除"trip-screen test" change to "triple-screen test"
"do Doppler machine" change to "use a Doppler machine"
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回覆刪除This mother is in the third trimester of pregnancy. Today, she is going to have an ultrasound examination to check the fetal position and make sure the umbilical cord is not around the neck. The doctor will also examine the fetal heartbeat, fetal gender, and amniotic fluid volume to see if there are any abnormal results. During this prenatal period, the mother often feels nauseous, which leads her to vomit frequently.
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刪除51091153 賴俐方During my first trimester, I experienced severe morning sickness almost every day. Despite the nausea, I was excited for my first ultrasound examination. It was an unforgettable moment when I heard the fetal heartbeat for the first time—it made everything feel real.
回覆刪除As the gestation period progressed, my midwife scheduled regular prenatal visits to monitor my fetal development. She checked the fetal position and the placenta location to make sure everything was on track.
Now, I'm in my third trimester, and I can't wait to meet my baby.
Mary went for her prenatal checkup and had an ultrasound examination. She was happy to hear her baby fetal heartbeat and to know the fetal position was normal, not in a breech position. The doctor also checked the amniotic fluid volume and placenta location,.
回覆刪除Mary sometimes felt nauseous and would vomit in the mornings, she knew it was just morning sickness, a common part of pregnancy.