Speaker: 任熹 You did a very well research on this presentation, but your accent is a little bit vague. Also, the video is too long, and it should be in English.
1. 1) Well-done 2) Well-prepared 3) 10-minute speaking, not easy. Very good 4) content: good 5) no Chinese 6) some problems: pronunciation, grammar Remains Main Solemn Decorated Tourists Professional Method Architecture Fried Pie Principals Comprehensive Science Engineering Science Area History Celebrity "Choice" our school We "building" He "uses" 7) improve: Q & A
任熹： your topic is good because the picture of food make me interest in it and want to try it. 袁瑞：i like Jay Chou too, because his song is great. But he is not my favourite male singer in Asia, haha. 雪萍：i agree that we dont need to copy otherone, we are special and we are who we are. 庭萱：i like EDM music too because it make me want to movie my body and dance haha, i want to go to EDM festival because i didnt go there before.
任 Xi: The introduction of HeNan KaiFeng and HeNan University. The photographs you posted are appealing. I like those Chinese classical architectures.
袁 Rui: The popular Music Star in Asia-Jay Chou. Good job on your introduction of him and good at Q&A. I suppose there is nobody doesn't like him. He is talented!
鄭 XuePing: Kylie Lip Challenge is interesting, while it is dangerous for one's lip. I had seen some videos about fans did the Kylie Jenner lip Challenge. That's right. It's funny and weird.
Sharra 莊: EDM Festival. In the recent years,EDM is popular all around the world. The Festival in the video is so grand. It's really suitable for the young like us to attend and have fun. How cool and magical EDM Music is, because it makes me want to swing my body while you are playing the film. Lol!! An interesting topic for presentation.
任熹：Good presentation. And your report makes me hungry.�� 袁瑞：Speak fluently, and do very detailed about Jay Chou. 鄭雪萍：This my first time that I heard Kylie Lip Challenge, that’s interesting. 莊庭萱：I love EDM music too. And your videos make me excitement.
Speaker: 任熹
回覆刪除You did a very well research on this presentation, but your accent is a little bit vague. Also, the video is too long, and it should be in English.
Thank you！
刪除任熹： Good presentation, but if the vedio is in English would be better.
回覆刪除Thank you! i'll improvement.
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回覆刪除1) Well-done
2) Well-prepared
3) 10-minute speaking, not easy. Very good
4) content: good
5) no Chinese
6) some problems: pronunciation, grammar
Remains
Main
Solemn
Decorated
Tourists
Professional
Method
Architecture
Fried
Pie
Principals
Comprehensive
Science
Engineering
Science
Area
History
Celebrity
"Choice" our school
We "building"
He "uses"
7) improve: Q & A
To 任熹： can speak more clearly and fluently. I think the pictures are beautiful.
回覆刪除Thanks for your suggestion!
刪除Speaker:任熹
回覆刪除I think you perform the words very great,hope you can doit better.
I'll improve my english level
刪除TO RENXI:
回覆刪除a good introducement about your hometown.
Thanks! Old iron and i will double cherk 666 for you!
刪除to yuanrui:
回覆刪除very whole content,and i also like JAY ZHOU.
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回覆刪除1) I like your theme
2) try to use bullet points, short sentences (slides)
3) improve: eye contact
4) content: good, interesting
5) time: perfect
6) Q & A: good
7) pronunciation:
Style
Saying
Diversity
Hired
Lyricist
Genres
Efforts
Speaker: 袁瑞
回覆刪除I also love Jay Chou, but you should know the problems I mentioned .
To 袁瑞：
回覆刪除Speak well, but not just read the ppt.
TO 袁瑞
回覆刪除I like Jay Chou too,your perform is good! so fluently and clearly
To:袁瑞
回覆刪除I believe you can do it better next time.
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回覆刪除1) you speak with clarity. Very clear. Very good.
2) introduction: very good
3) pronunciation: perfect
4) too short
5) Q & A: clear, simple.
To:鄭雪萍
回覆刪除I think you do your topic very good.I like it.
Speaker: 鄭雪萍
回覆刪除I love your theme, but you should say more about this. Because after you finished, you still had four minutes
To 鄭雪萍:
回覆刪除Speak fluently, and you can speak more about your summary.
鄭雪萍：
回覆刪除Good presentation. Good interact.
任熹：Presentation is well.To improve your pronunciation.
回覆刪除袁瑞：The content is detailed.
雪萍：You speak fluently and the topic is good.
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回覆刪除1) don't pause for too long.
2) improve: fluency
3) no Chinese
4) pronunciation: good
5) choose one film
Speaker: 莊庭萱
回覆刪除We can know you really love EDM, but the videos you showed were too many. In addition, those videos attracted me a lot.
任熹： your topic is good because the picture of food make me interest in it and want to try it.
回覆刪除袁瑞：i like Jay Chou too, because his song is great. But he is not my favourite male singer in Asia, haha.
雪萍：i agree that we dont need to copy otherone, we are special and we are who we are.
庭萱：i like EDM music too because it make me want to movie my body and dance haha, i want to go to EDM festival because i didnt go there before.
任 Xi: The introduction of HeNan KaiFeng and HeNan University. The photographs you posted are appealing. I like those Chinese classical architectures.
回覆刪除袁 Rui: The popular Music Star in Asia-Jay Chou. Good job on your introduction of him and good at Q&A.
I suppose there is nobody doesn't like him. He is talented!
鄭 XuePing: Kylie Lip Challenge is interesting, while it is dangerous for one's lip. I had seen some videos about fans did the Kylie Jenner lip Challenge. That's right. It's funny and weird.
Sharra 莊: EDM Festival.
In the recent years,EDM is popular all around the world. The Festival in the video is so grand. It's really suitable for the young like us to attend and have fun. How cool and magical EDM Music is, because it makes me want to swing my body while you are playing the film. Lol!!
An interesting topic for presentation.
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回覆刪除Q & A: good!
莊庭萱：I love EDM too! But your videos are really too much and too long.
回覆刪除任熹：
回覆刪除Honestly, I can’t really understand what he is saying but he’s not afraid to speak so that’s nice, good job.
袁瑞：
Even though I don’t really listen to Jay Chou’s music, she made a pretty good presentation.
鄭雪萍：
Maybe she can choose a topic that she knows more, not just a random one.
莊庭萱：
Really detailed information on those EDM festivals, great job.
to no.4:
回覆刪除nice music.i like it!!
任熹：It’s nice to know your hometown
回覆刪除袁瑞：I also love him very much
鄭雪萍：I think this behavior is sick to me
莊庭萱：I also love edm music
EDM is the beat music I had ever heard.
回覆刪除任熹：Good presentation. And your report makes me hungry.��
回覆刪除袁瑞：Speak fluently, and do very detailed about Jay Chou.
鄭雪萍：This my first time that I heard Kylie Lip Challenge, that’s interesting.
莊庭萱：I love EDM music too. And your videos make me excitement.
庭萱：Your presentation is interesting.I love EDM !
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