Hope you have a more wonderful and unforgettable memories in Taiwan. But your accent is a little bit vague, you have to change it and speak more fluently.
1 1) thank you for trying your best to answer questions. 2) these place(s) 3) friend(s) 4) spicy 5) chewy 6) try to be coherent 7) improve: fluency, eye contact, tense, grammar, logical, 8) try to finish all the themes you brought up 9) try to make a conclusion
Speaker: 林麗恩 The videos are too many, but you completely show your love of the USA. Also, you need to know what your videos talk about, and not just show them to us.
1韓帥帥： Your topic is good. I know that you can not custom the food in Taiwan. 2林麗恩： You sound that one day you want to travel to USA. Hope your dream can come true.
Stephanie 林: I've never been to the US. There are lots of tourist spots in that country. And I'd like to visit Disney land in America. It must be a great and interesting amusement park.
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Hope you have a more wonderful and unforgettable memories in Taiwan.
回覆刪除But your accent is a little bit vague, you have to change it and speak more fluently.
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回覆刪除1) thank you for trying your best to answer questions.
2) these place(s)
3) friend(s)
4) spicy
5) chewy
6) try to be coherent
7) improve: fluency, eye contact, tense, grammar, logical,
8) try to finish all the themes you brought up
9) try to make a conclusion
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回覆刪除Can speak louder.
Don't be shy,you can speak louder!
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回覆刪除All I know is this: videos.
I want to America after your presentation~
回覆刪除Speaker: 林麗恩
回覆刪除The videos are too many, but you completely show your love of the USA. Also, you need to know what your videos talk about, and not just show them to us.
2.
回覆刪除Can say more about your summary.
1. A nice introduction of your trip in Tainwan.
回覆刪除2. The video is too long~
1韓帥帥： Your topic is good. I know that you can not custom the food in Taiwan.
回覆刪除2林麗恩： You sound that one day you want to travel to USA. Hope your dream can come true.
韓Shuai Shuai- Have fun in Taiwan.
回覆刪除Stephanie 林: I've never been to the US. There are lots of tourist spots in that country. And I'd like to visit Disney land in America. It must be a great and interesting amusement park.
韓帥帥：Speak louder and your presentation is good.
回覆刪除林麗恩：Good topic.l also want to go to America,but the video is too long.