2018年3月14日 星期三

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  1. 書睿:
    ◎Eye contact!
    Wish you could accomplish your dream in the future!

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  2. To Jeffery:
    I don't know one day you want to be a singer
    in the future. I hope your dream will construe

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  3. 劉書睿
    It's good to hear you have dream. I think dreaming is expensive and I wish you a dream come true.

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  4. Speaker : 黃莛予
    Video is too long, and in your words,we can know that you are a very kind girl. Additionally, the earth needs more people like you.

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  5. To Jeffrey:
    I think this must have courage to speak up your dream to us, and you do a great job.

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  6. 1.Just keep going~
    2.I want to watch this TV program.And we should be kind.

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  7. 莛予:
    The video gave me food for thought!
    And I think that is a great program.

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  8. Jeffrey:
    I hope you can dreams come true. Good presentation.

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  9. 莛予:
    Your eyes contact!
    You express you world clarity.

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  10. 黃莛予
    Good topic.

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  11. 1
    Introduction?
    English topic?
    Conclusion?
    Don't shake
    Improve fluency
    Too short
    Say more

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  12. 莛予:
    Good presentation. The topic is good.

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  13. To 黃莛予:
    You can told more about your options about this video, and the video let us learn how the people do to the different person like a well dressed woman or a tramp.

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  14. 2
    Good introduction
    Speak fluently
    Clear summary
    Well done
    Improve: emphasize some words, speak louder

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    1. have a dream is a good thing.maybe it is the best thing in this world

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  15. Jeffery;
    It's good to know your dream, wish you can follow your heart and be successful one day!

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  16. For Liushurui
    I think your speech is splendid,you offer a video for us in the beginning,that's a good start,but a bad point that you voice is too small,if you increase DB it will greater.

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  17. Speaker : 張郁旻
    Medication is in a situation of dilemma. Some people think that it can be legalized but some people don't think so. However, you did a good job on it.

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  18. 郁旻:
    The video you choice makes me think about "Life"and "death". Death is an important class that we need to face it.

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  19. 郁旻:
    There are much ethic controversy about Volunteer Euthanasia. A nice topic to discuss.

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  20. For 黄莛予
    Wonderful topic,good introduction and your speak is fluently,can you speak louder next time?

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  21. 郁旻:
    We gonna passed away some days,your presentation gave me a hard feeling

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  22. 書睿
    It’s an inspiring film, hope you can realize your dream one day.

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  23. for 黄莛予
    speak louder and too much words。

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  24. To 張郁旻: discuss
    It is a serious issue that we have to face. I think this is worth to every one to discuss.

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  25. 郁昱:wonder topic and give me a important thinking for this topic。

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  26. 莛予
    Good speaking and good topic. Maybe next time you can speak loudly.

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  27. 刘书睿:a nice dream and hope you can achieve it

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  28. 張郁旻
    I think I will accept this way of death too.
    Although lose people who around you is heart breaking but it is better to everyone to get ready lose somebody.

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  29. 詳富:
    He's presentation is particularly good~Besides his voice is louder~

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  30. For 尤详富
    It's clear that your speech is very fluently and your PPT is impressive.At it all,wish you have a good progress! Brilliant! your voice sounds good!

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  31. 書睿:
    Your speech is positive and it makes me feel hopeful to keep going.

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  32. Speaker : 尤詳富
    PPT is good,but if you have more eye contact that will be better.

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  33. 詳富
    Your presentation is brilliant!

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  34. 尤祥富
    Your presentation is abundantly.

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  35. 尤詳富:
    You did a great PowerPoint and also speak fluently !

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  36. 詳富:
    ◎Speak louder~
    A great topic to discuss health!

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  37. 書睿:I'll keep my fingers crossed!

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  38. for尤详富
    it is good。many details and impressive。

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  39. To 尤詳富:
    Your explanation is detailed that we can learn more about how to keep body healthier.

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  40. 莛予:I have seen that TV program!

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  41. Jeffrey: i think keep going is very important to us to finsh our dream. i think you should speak slowly because sometunes you will speak too fast and we cant understand what you are saying.
    莛予:respect is very important and we need to help people who really need skme help. i think the topic is very great and your ppt background color should be change because some words are diffcult to see.
    心瑜:
    郁旻:this topic is so heavy for me because i think we are young and it is our future and who want to face die, right? But the man is so brave when facing die in this vidro.
    尤福:it is an interesting topic that i can learn a lot of new things from your presentation. i think you should speak loudly. Thus, it is a good presentation
    羿儒:

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  42. 4
    Use bullet points
    Improve: grammar
    Pronunciation: unpredictable.
    Theme: good, valuable
    No Chinese
    Make good use of articles written by other people. Try to learn from them.

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  43. 莛予:
    You speak fluently and the topic is good.

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  44. 劉書睿:He's got a good presentation, but due to technical difficulties, he can't present his work properly but he did interact with the audiences quite well.
    黃莛予:I've always love the topic of whether people will help out homeless people on the street. Very intriguing.

    張郁旻:It's always hard to talk about death, especially when you are the one choosing to die or not to die. Good presentation.

    尤祥富:A rare topic he chose, really good PowerPoint, very clear and he definitely did a lot of research before this presentation. Good job.

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  45. 郁旻:
    Impressive presentation!

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  46. Jefferey 劉: Hope you become a singer successfully.
    The topic that you presented is worth thinking.

    Nina黃: "what would you do?"
    I agree with you it is an impressive video and everyone is the same.
    In the video,there is man said that if you were him(a person who falls on the ground),you would need help,too."
    A great saying on your presentation :"Respect is for those who deserve it, not for those who demand for it."

    Sherry張: The man in this video suffered from Amyotrophic lateral sclerosis which is such a rare disease. Live and Die are hard to choose when we face a person cannot undertake the pain.

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  47. 5
    Slides: good
    Content: good and difficult
    New words: a lot
    Pronuciation: good
    Fluency: speak fluently
    Well prepared
    We done, impressive
    Improve: facial expression

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  48. 郁旻:Your video made me think a lot and the value of a life.

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  49. 尤富: Your topic was great!

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