To 黃莛予： You can told more about your options about this video, and the video let us learn how the people do to the different person like a well dressed woman or a tramp.
For Liushurui I think your speech is splendid,you offer a video for us in the beginning,that's a good start,but a bad point that you voice is too small,if you increase DB it will greater.
Speaker : 張郁旻 Medication is in a situation of dilemma. Some people think that it can be legalized but some people don't think so. However, you did a good job on it.
張郁旻 I think I will accept this way of death too. Although lose people who around you is heart breaking but it is better to everyone to get ready lose somebody.
For 尤详富 It's clear that your speech is very fluently and your PPT is impressive.At it all,wish you have a good progress! Brilliant! your voice sounds good!
Jeffrey: i think keep going is very important to us to finsh our dream. i think you should speak slowly because sometunes you will speak too fast and we cant understand what you are saying. 莛予:respect is very important and we need to help people who really need skme help. i think the topic is very great and your ppt background color should be change because some words are diffcult to see. 心瑜: 郁旻:this topic is so heavy for me because i think we are young and it is our future and who want to face die, right? But the man is so brave when facing die in this vidro. 尤福:it is an interesting topic that i can learn a lot of new things from your presentation. i think you should speak loudly. Thus, it is a good presentation 羿儒:
4 Use bullet points Improve: grammar Pronunciation: unpredictable. Theme: good, valuable No Chinese Make good use of articles written by other people. Try to learn from them.
劉書睿：He's got a good presentation, but due to technical difficulties, he can't present his work properly but he did interact with the audiences quite well. 黃莛予：I've always love the topic of whether people will help out homeless people on the street. Very intriguing.
張郁旻：It's always hard to talk about death, especially when you are the one choosing to die or not to die. Good presentation.
尤祥富：A rare topic he chose, really good PowerPoint, very clear and he definitely did a lot of research before this presentation. Good job.
Jefferey 劉: Hope you become a singer successfully. The topic that you presented is worth thinking.
Nina黃: "what would you do?" I agree with you it is an impressive video and everyone is the same. In the video,there is man said that if you were him(a person who falls on the ground),you would need help,too." A great saying on your presentation :"Respect is for those who deserve it, not for those who demand for it."
Sherry張: The man in this video suffered from Amyotrophic lateral sclerosis which is such a rare disease. Live and Die are hard to choose when we face a person cannot undertake the pain.
5 Slides: good Content: good and difficult New words: a lot Pronuciation: good Fluency: speak fluently Well prepared We done, impressive Improve: facial expression
書睿：
回覆刪除◎Eye contact!
Wish you could accomplish your dream in the future!
To Jeffery:
回覆刪除I don't know one day you want to be a singer
in the future. I hope your dream will construe
劉書睿
回覆刪除It's good to hear you have dream. I think dreaming is expensive and I wish you a dream come true.
Speaker : 黃莛予
回覆刪除Video is too long, and in your words,we can know that you are a very kind girl. Additionally, the earth needs more people like you.
To Jeffrey:
回覆刪除I think this must have courage to speak up your dream to us, and you do a great job.
1.Just keep going～
回覆刪除2.I want to watch this TV program.And we should be kind.
莛予：
回覆刪除The video gave me food for thought!
And I think that is a great program.
Jeffrey:
回覆刪除I hope you can dreams come true. Good presentation.
莛予：
回覆刪除Your eyes contact!
You express you world clarity.
黃莛予
回覆刪除Good topic.
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回覆刪除Introduction?
English topic?
Conclusion?
Don't shake
Improve fluency
Too short
Say more
莛予：
回覆刪除Good presentation. The topic is good.
To 黃莛予：
回覆刪除You can told more about your options about this video, and the video let us learn how the people do to the different person like a well dressed woman or a tramp.
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回覆刪除Good introduction
Speak fluently
Clear summary
Well done
Improve: emphasize some words, speak louder
have a dream is a good thing.maybe it is the best thing in this world
刪除Jeffery;
回覆刪除It's good to know your dream, wish you can follow your heart and be successful one day!
For Liushurui
回覆刪除I think your speech is splendid,you offer a video for us in the beginning,that's a good start,but a bad point that you voice is too small,if you increase DB it will greater.
Speaker : 張郁旻
回覆刪除Medication is in a situation of dilemma. Some people think that it can be legalized but some people don't think so. However, you did a good job on it.
郁旻：
回覆刪除The video you choice makes me think about "Life"and "death". Death is an important class that we need to face it.
郁旻：
回覆刪除There are much ethic controversy about Volunteer Euthanasia. A nice topic to discuss.
For 黄莛予
回覆刪除Wonderful topic，good introduction and your speak is fluently,can you speak louder next time?
郁旻：
回覆刪除We gonna passed away some days,your presentation gave me a hard feeling
書睿
回覆刪除It’s an inspiring film, hope you can realize your dream one day.
for 黄莛予
回覆刪除speak louder and too much words。
To 張郁旻： discuss
回覆刪除It is a serious issue that we have to face. I think this is worth to every one to discuss.
郁昱：wonder topic and give me a important thinking for this topic。
回覆刪除莛予
回覆刪除Good speaking and good topic. Maybe next time you can speak loudly.
刘书睿：a nice dream and hope you can achieve it
回覆刪除張郁旻
回覆刪除I think I will accept this way of death too.
Although lose people who around you is heart breaking but it is better to everyone to get ready lose somebody.
詳富：
回覆刪除He's presentation is particularly good～Besides his voice is louder~
For 尤详富
回覆刪除It's clear that your speech is very fluently and your PPT is impressive.At it all,wish you have a good progress! Brilliant! your voice sounds good!
書睿：
回覆刪除Your speech is positive and it makes me feel hopeful to keep going.
Speaker ： 尤詳富
回覆刪除PPT is good,but if you have more eye contact that will be better.
詳富
回覆刪除Your presentation is brilliant!
尤祥富
回覆刪除Your presentation is abundantly.
尤詳富：
回覆刪除You did a great PowerPoint and also speak fluently !
詳富：
回覆刪除◎Speak louder~
A great topic to discuss health!
書睿：I'll keep my fingers crossed!
回覆刪除for尤详富
回覆刪除it is good。many details and impressive。
To 尤詳富：
回覆刪除Your explanation is detailed that we can learn more about how to keep body healthier.
莛予：I have seen that TV program!
回覆刪除Jeffrey: i think keep going is very important to us to finsh our dream. i think you should speak slowly because sometunes you will speak too fast and we cant understand what you are saying.
回覆刪除莛予:respect is very important and we need to help people who really need skme help. i think the topic is very great and your ppt background color should be change because some words are diffcult to see.
心瑜:
郁旻:this topic is so heavy for me because i think we are young and it is our future and who want to face die, right? But the man is so brave when facing die in this vidro.
尤福:it is an interesting topic that i can learn a lot of new things from your presentation. i think you should speak loudly. Thus, it is a good presentation
羿儒:
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Use bullet points
Improve: grammar
Pronunciation: unpredictable.
Theme: good, valuable
No Chinese
Make good use of articles written by other people. Try to learn from them.
郁旻：The topic is good!
回覆刪除莛予：
回覆刪除You speak fluently and the topic is good.
劉書睿：He's got a good presentation, but due to technical difficulties, he can't present his work properly but he did interact with the audiences quite well.
回覆刪除黃莛予：I've always love the topic of whether people will help out homeless people on the street. Very intriguing.
張郁旻：It's always hard to talk about death, especially when you are the one choosing to die or not to die. Good presentation.
尤祥富：A rare topic he chose, really good PowerPoint, very clear and he definitely did a lot of research before this presentation. Good job.
郁旻：
回覆刪除Impressive presentation!
Jefferey 劉: Hope you become a singer successfully.
回覆刪除The topic that you presented is worth thinking.
Nina黃: "what would you do?"
I agree with you it is an impressive video and everyone is the same.
In the video,there is man said that if you were him(a person who falls on the ground),you would need help,too."
A great saying on your presentation :"Respect is for those who deserve it, not for those who demand for it."
Sherry張: The man in this video suffered from Amyotrophic lateral sclerosis which is such a rare disease. Live and Die are hard to choose when we face a person cannot undertake the pain.
typo/ Sherry-> Shelley
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回覆刪除Slides: good
Content: good and difficult
New words: a lot
Pronuciation: good
Fluency: speak fluently
Well prepared
We done, impressive
Improve: facial expression
莛予：I love your topic!!!
回覆刪除郁旻：Your video made me think a lot and the value of a life.
回覆刪除詳富：ppt is great!!!
回覆刪除書睿：Good presentation~
回覆刪除尤富： Your topic was great!
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