1. a bowel movement
2. bruise
3. container
4. dresing table
5. gauze
6. lead apron
7. stool
8. urine
9. poke
10. release
11. genital
12. contaminate
13. make a tight fist
15. sample
16. tourniquet
17. blood tube
18. antiseptic wipe
19. needle
20. sharps container
21. plaster
22. veins
Before taking a blood sample, the nurse asked me to make a tight fist so she could find my veins more easily. Then, she cleaned the area with an antiseptic wipe, tied a tourniquet around my arm, and inserted the needle. After collecting the blood into a blood tube, she placed the used needle in the sharps container and covered the spot with a plaster to prevent a bruise.
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回覆刪除This morning, I went to the clinic. The nurse asked me to make a tight fist to see my veins. She put a tourniquet on my arm and cleaned it with an antiseptic wipe.
She used a needle to take a sample and put it in a blood tube. Then she told me to release my fist. She pressed some gauze on my arm and put on a plaster. The needle went into a sharps container. I got a small bruise, but it was okay.
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回覆刪除This morning, I accompanied my friend to the clinic for a routine health check-up. The nurse asked him to make a tight fist so that his veins would become more visible. Then, she tied a tourniquet ar become more visible.
She carefully inserted a needle into the vein and collected a sample of blood into a blood tube. After the procedure, she immediately disposed of the needle in a sharps container to prevent injury or contamination.
The entire process took just a few minutes, but a small bruise began to appear where the needle had been. Even though it looked a little painful, it was a quick and necessary check-up that helps monitor over helps.
The nurse asked the patient to make a tight fist so she could see the veins better. She tied a tourniquet on the arm and cleaned the skin with an antiseptic wipe to keep it clean. Then, she used a needle to take blood and put it into a blood tube.After that, she pressed some gauze on the spot and put a plaster over it. Finally, she threw the used needle into a sharps container so no one would get hurt.
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回覆刪除This morning at the clinic, a patient came in complaining of a bruise on his arm after trying to make a tight fist for a blood test. The nurse asked him to sit on the stool near the dressing table, where she prepared some gauze and a lead apron for protection during an X-ray. While waiting, the patient said he needed to pee, so the nurse handed him a container to collect his urine. He also mentioned he hadn’t had a bowel movement since yesterday. After returning, he accidentally poked himself with the needle on the table, which could potentially contaminate the area. The nurse quickly cleaned the wound and checked his genital area for any signs of infection before allowing him to release the pressure from his fist.
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回覆刪除Before a urine test, the nurse provides a container for the patient to collect their urine. Once collected, the urine becomes a sample for laboratory analysis.
If a blood test is needed, the nurse first uses an antiseptic wipe to clean the skin, then applies a tourniquet to make the veins more visible. Once a vein is located, the nurse uses a needle to poke and draw the required amount of blood.
After the blood is drawn, the nurse presses a piece of gauze over the puncture site and applies a plaster to protect the area and prevent infection.
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回覆刪除Last week, I went to the hospital for a health check. The nurse asked me to make a tight fist so she could find my veins more easily. After that, she tied a tourniquet around my arm and used an antiseptic wipe to clean the skin. Then she picked up a needle and gently poked my arm to draw blood. I looked away because I was scared, but the nurse was very kind.
Once the blood was collected, she placed a plaster over the spot and put the blood in a container. She also reminded me not to touch the sharps container where the used needles go, for safety. Finally, she labeled the sample and sent it to the lab. It was a simple but interesting experience.
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回覆刪除Today is my first day in the hospital. I see a dressing table. On it, there is a needle, blood tubes, and antiseptic wipe.I help a man. I clean his vein and use the needle to get blood into the blood tube. He is nice.Then, he says, “I have a bowel movement…” I call the nurse. We clean and don’t contaminate things.A boy comes with a bruise. I clean it with antiseptic wipe. He smiles.Later, I take a pee sample from a patient. One woman has pain in genital area. I help the doctor.I feel tired, but happy. I learn a lot today.
Your paragraph is clear.
刪除I had a follow-up this morning. The nurse asked me to make a tight fist before she poked my arm to take a blood sample. After that, she covered the area with gauze to stop the bleeding. I noticed a small bruise forming on my arm.
回覆刪除Then, I had a bowel movement and passed urine. The nurse collected the urine in a container for testing. She reminded me not to contaminate the sample by touching the inside of the container.
Later, the doctor examined my genital area as part of a routine check-up. I sat on a stool next to the dressing table while waiting for the results. During the X-ray, they gave me a lead apron to wear for protection.
Finally, I was told I could release my fist and relax.
Your paragraph is clear and well-organized.
刪除When the nurse was preparing to draw blood, she asked the patient to make a tight fist so that the veins would be easier to see. She tied a tourniquet around the upper arm and cleaned the area with an antiseptic wipe. Then, she carefully inserted the needle into the vein and collected the blood into a blood tube.After the blood draw, she immediately placed the used needle into the sharps container to avoid any risk of injury or contaminate. She covered the puncture site with a plaster and informed the patient that a small bruise might appear later. All supplies were kept on the dressing table, ensuring a clean and organized workspace.
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刪除Emily went to the clinic for a check-up. The nurse asked her to make a tight fist so she could find her veins more easily. Then, she tied a tourniquet around Emily’s arm and cleaned the area with an antiseptic wipe.She gently inserted the needle and collected blood into a blood tube. After that, she removed the needle and covered the spot with a plaster. Emily noticed the nurse carefully placed the used needle into a sharps container.
回覆刪除Later, the nurse gave Emily a small container and asked her to provide a urine sample.
I went to the clinic today. The nurse gave me a container for a urine sample. She told me to wash my genital area first.
回覆刪除Then I sat on a stool. She tied a tourniquet on my arm and told me to make a tight fist. She cleaned my skin with an antiseptic wipe and used a needle to take blood. It was just a small poke.
After that, she put the needle in a sharps container and gave me a plaster. I wore a lead apron for an X-ray and saw a little bruise on my arm.
Your passage is clear and well-written.
刪除Today, I helped a patient with a urine test. I gave him a container and asked him to collect the sample.
回覆刪除After that, we went to the lab. I wore a lead apron and prepared the needle for a blood test.
I asked the patient to make a tight fist, then I used a tourniquet to find the veins.
After collecting the blood, I placed the blood tube in the tray carefully.
Your passage is clear, but please write a bit longer.
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回覆刪除Before the test, the nurse asked me to give a urine and stool sample. She gave me a container for each one and reminded me to clean my genital area carefully so I wouldn’t contaminate the sample. Later, during the blood draw, she told me to make a tight fist and then release it after the poke. Afterward, she pressed a piece of gauze on the site to prevent a bruise.
Your passage is clear, but you need to write a bit longer.
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回覆刪除This morning, I went to the hospital to get some blood drawn. The nurse told me to make a tight fist so she could see my veins better. Then she tied a tourniquet around my arm and wiped the spot with an antiseptic wipe.
After that, she used a needle to draw blood into a blood tube. Once the sample was collected, she told me to release my fist, took the needle out, and put a plaster on the spot. Then she tossed the used needle into the sharps container. The whole thing was pretty quick and didn’t really hurt at all.
This passage is clear and good.
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回覆刪除Today in health class, we learned about the body. The teacher said we have a bowel movement and urine to take waste out of our body. This is how we release it.
We need to use a clean container to collect urine. If it’s dirty, it can contaminate the sample. In the school clinic, there is a dressing table with gauze for small wounds.
One student had a bruise from playing soccer. The nurse showed us how to make a tight fist before a blood test. Some students said they felt like they would pee because they were nervous. It was a funny and interesting class.
Your passage is clear.
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回覆刪除Today I go to hospital. Nurse say she want take blood. She say “make a tight fist.” Then she put tourniquet on my arm. She look my vein. After that, she use antiseptic wipe clean my skin. Then she use needle and poke me. I little scared. She take blood into blood tube. After finish, she put plaster on my arm. The needle go to sharps container. She say this is sample for lab. I say thank you.
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回覆刪除Today I was drawing blood from a patient in the ward. When I was ready with the tourniquet, I told the patient to make a tight fist. Then I used the needle to poke the patient’s vein and took the blood tube to collect the blood sample.
After that, I put the needle into the sharps container and pasted the plaster.
When I was done, the patient said he wanted to pee, so I told him to collect a urine sample.
Today I was drawing blood from a patient in the ward. When I was ready with the tourniquet, I told the patient to make a tight fist. Then I used the needle to poke the patient’s vein and took the blood tube to collect the blood sample.
After that, I put the needle into the sharps container and pasted the plaster.
When I was done, the patient said he wanted to pee, so I told him to collect a urine sample.
After that, I went to check another patient who just had a bowel movement, so I helped clean up and made sure not to contaminate the dressing table. I also checked the container for the stool sample and labeled it correctly. Later, I assisted with wound care by preparing the gauze and organizing supplies on the table.
Although it was a busy shift, I felt satisfied seeing everything handled well, and the patients felt more comfortable.
The passage is clear and well-written!
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回覆刪除Teacher: Today,I am going to teach you how to help patient to collect blood culture.
First, you must tight the tourniquet to their arm. Second, use antiseptic wipe to avoid patient contaminate. After you use needle into patient’s body, you can release the tourniquet and put needle into the sharp container. Anyone has other question?
Students: No!
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刪除Today, I went to the clinic for a lab test. The nurse gave me a container to collect my urine and stool. She told me not to contaminate the samples. After that, I sat on the dressing table and waited.
回覆刪除The nurse wore a lead apron before taking an X-ray. Then she asked me to make a tight fist, and she used a needle to poke my arm. After the blood test, she put some gauze on the spot.Later, I saw a patient with a big bruise on his leg. The nurse said he fell after having a bowel movement.
The paragraph is clear.
刪除51111154: During the lab test, the nurse placed a tourniquet tightly around the patient’s arm to locate his veins, then gently poked a needle in; although she collected the urine sample properly in a container without contaminating it, the patient still ended up with a huge bruise after trying so hard to pee under pressure.
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回覆刪除I needed to take a urine sample,so the nurse told me to clean my genital area from front to back with a clean towel first.Then l had to pee a small amount into the toilet.
And then,I also needed to take a srltool sample,but I don't want to make a bowel movement now,so the nurse told me that I'll wait until next time to collect and be careful not to contaminated the stool with toilet water or urine.
Final,I needed to take the blood test.The nurse needed to prepare something,includes tourniques,blood tube,antiseptic,sharps container,needle and plaster.after that,I also needed to use a gauze padto press down on the spot to prevent a bruise.
"srltool sample" change to "stool sample"
刪除"so the nurse told me that I'll wait until next time to collect" change to "so the nurse told me I could wait until next time to collect"
"be careful not to contaminated the stool with toilet water or urine" change to "be careful not to contaminate the stool with toilet water or urine"
"gauze padto press" change to "gauze pad to press"
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The nurse gives a container for a urine or stool sample. If you need to pee or have a bowel movement, just let them know.
回覆刪除Before a blood test, make a tight fist. The nurse uses a tourniquet, cleans your skin with an antiseptic wipe, and uses a needle to take blood into a blood tube.
After that, they put on a plaster or gauze. Used needles go in a sharps container. A small bruise may appear.
You may lie on a dressing table, sometimes with a lead apron. Be careful not to contaminate the genital area.
If you’re scared, it’s okay to say “poke” instead of shot. Nurses are there to help you.
"uses a needle to take blood into a blood tube" change to "uses a needle to draw blood into a blood tube"
刪除It is more common to use "draw".
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回覆刪除This morning, a patient came in for a blood test and urine test.First, the nurse gave the patient a container to collect the urine sample.After that, she cleaned the patient’s arm with an antiseptic wipe.She wrapped a tourniquet around the upper arm to find a good vein.Then, she gently inserted the needle and collected blood into a blood tube.When it was done, she removed the needle and pressed a cotton ball over the spot.
Your paragraph is clear!
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回覆刪除A:Good morning! How are you?
B:l am fine.what are you doing now?
A:l need to get some test about your urine and blood .
B:OK
A:The red container is for urine sample.Wait a moment please take this container to the bathroom and provide a sample.Don’t touch inside that container. It will contaminate.Do your understand?
B:OK.l think l can do it!
A:Good.Now I will do that blood test.
B:Sure.Here you go.
A:Now make a thigh fist.l use the needle to poke your veins.l am finished.Place your finger on the gauze pad and apply pressure that you don’t want to get a bruise.
"l need to get some test about your urine and blood" change to "I need to get some tests done on your urine and blood."
刪除"Don’t touch inside that container" change to "Don’t touch the inside of the container"
"Do your understand?" change to "Do you understand?"
"l am finished. Place your finger on the gauze pad and apply pressure that you don’t want to get a bruise" change to "I’m finished. Place your finger on the gauze pad and apply pressure so you don’t get a bruise."
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回覆刪除I felt really uncomfortable yesterday. So I went to hospital to see the doctor. The nurse helped me do some laboratory tests. For example, urine test, stool test, and blood test. First, we did the urine test. She told me cleaned my genital, then let the urine out. She also reminded me pee a smell amount urine before collect the urine. Then the nurse gave me a little bottle to collect the stool sample. The lest one test is blood test, that was my most worried one. Because I really scared shot! But the nurse very patient. She told me take a deep breath and inhale, then she done! Even didn’t any feel! I really admired that nurse, and make up my mind to be that kind of nurse!
"went to hospital" change to "went to the hospital"
刪除"She told me cleaned my genital" change to "She told me to clean my genital area""reminded me pee a smell amount urine" change to "reminded me to pee a small amount before collecting the urine""
The lest one test" change to "The last test"
"the nurse very patient" change to "the nurse was very patient"
"Even didn’t any feel!" change to "I didn’t feel anything at all!"
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回覆刪除I needed to take a urine sample,so the nurse told me to clean my genital area from front to back with a clean towel first.Then l had to pee a small amount into the toilet.
And then,I also needed to take a stool sample,but I don't want to make a bowel movement now,so the nurse told me that I'll wait until next time to collect and be careful not to contaminated the stool with toilet water or urine.
Final,I needed to take the blood test.The nurse needed to prepare something,includes tourniques,blood tube,antiseptic,sharps container,needle and plaster.after that,I also needed to use a gauze padto press down on the spot to prevent a bruise.
"includes" change to "including"
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回覆刪除A: Today we need to take a body check.
Please sit down in this chair.I will take the blood test.
B:Will I get a bruise?
A: It's won't. Now making a tight fist and take a deep breath. Done! Please your finger on this gauze.
A:Next we will do the urine test.You need to clean the genital area and wipe from front to back. After pee into the container until it is half full.
A:You can bring your stool sample to your next visit.
B:ok！I don't have a bowel movement today.
A: Finally we need to take X-ray. Please wear the lead apron . Ok! Finish!
B:Thank you! I will go to the restroom to pee.