I study in the Department of English Language, Literature, and Linguistics of Providence University. I strive for getting a golden certificate from TOEIC. In addition, I have a strong ambition for going abroad.
1.I think that getting the right decision can lead to an improved sense of my life. 2.To be a ground service requires certain language skills. 3.Graduating from college is important for many different reasons.
1. I major in Department of English Language and Literature. 2. My plan is studying abroad for the higher academic degree. 3. I can adapt the environment and work well with a team quickly.
1. I major in Department of English Language and Literature. 2. My plan is studying abroad for the higher academic degree. 3. I can adapt the environment and work well with a team quickly.
1.I major in English ,Linguistics in Providence University. 2.I'm an outgoing person and I enjoy helping people to make my life happier. 3.Getting this job not only to gain my working experience but also lead to improved my language skills.
1.I'm good at work assignment because my experience of being club president. 2.It's meaningful for me to finish the job on time. 3.I always be willing to help others if I've got extra time.
Standing in others shoes is my personality trait. I have a great experience with helping people. I believe that I can take my advantage to bring well-being for the company.
I study in Providence University,Department of English. I'm outgoing and willing to learn new things. I like to cooperate with others and listening to others opinions.
1. Being responsible is the most important thing that I think. 2. My hobbies are making friends and learning different languages. 3. I think that I’m a kind person, and I want to keep many pets in the future.
1,I am a person who can help colleagues in their work. 2,I will complete the task assigned by her boss by making her boss satisfied. 3,I won't ask for more than the average salary.
1.I love playing the musical instruments. 2.Studying foreign language is a fun thing for me. 3.I'm studying English and Chinese in Providence University.
I major in English in my college. I have great patient and I like to do things clearly. Although I don't have any experience right now ,I willing to learn and do my best.
1,I am a person who can help colleagues in their work. 2,I will complete the task assigned by her boss by making her boss satisfied. 3,Jillian won't ask for more than the average salary. 高靜文
I always think positive when I get in problems with the products. Some applicants may shy in the meeting. I want to learn more about English literature in this company.
Dear Sir: I'm Aurora(田仙雨), I saw on the recruitment website that your company is looking for new employees, I feel that I am competent to meet the requirement. First, I will be graduating form Xingyi University. Second, during my education, I have grasped the principals of my major and skills of practice. In the end, I can work hard, no matter how hard the work. Thank you for your reading.
1.I graduated from Providence University and major in English. 2.I had some work experiences like cashier, sales clerk and typist. 3.I like to learn new things and also have enthusiastic at work.
Easily communicate with others, since I had many experiences teaching elderly baking, horticultural, painting in the church. Also volunteers in library for over 3 years.
I am a good listener, majored in social work and professional in this area.
I am interested in knowing more about your experiences of teaching baking, horticulture, and painting in the church. I have the experience of teaching English Bible in the church. . . . . These are good "Topic sentences."
嵇鈺棋 1. I major in department of English language and literature. 2. I had some part-time job about this industry. 3. I have a strong interest on this job, that is why I want to get this chance.
I study in the Department of English Language, Literature, and Linguistics of Providence University. I strive for getting a golden certificate from TOEIC. In addition, I have a strong ambition for going abroad.
回覆刪除not so convincing.
刪除1.I think that getting the right decision can lead to an improved sense of my life.
回覆刪除2.To be a ground service requires certain language skills.
3.Graduating from college is important for many different reasons.
Your topic sentences are too broad. Try to be more specific.
刪除1. I major in Department of English Language and Literature.
回覆刪除2. My plan is studying abroad for the higher academic degree.
3. I can adapt the environment and work well with a team quickly.
1. I major in Department of English Language and Literature.
刪除2. My plan is studying abroad for the higher academic degree.
3. I can adapt the environment and work well with a team quickly.
1. ok
刪除2. Is it necessary to tell this before you apply for the job?
3. ok.
I study in Providence University.
回覆刪除I'm a outgoing person.
I like to get things done as soon as possible.
1. Too broad.
刪除2. ok.
3. ok.
I’m a responsible man
回覆刪除I like to try new things for new idea
I’m willing to help others when they have problems
ok
刪除1.I major in English ,Linguistics in Providence University.
回覆刪除2.I'm an outgoing person and I enjoy helping people to make my life happier.
3.Getting this job not only to gain my working experience but also lead to improved my language skills.
1. too broad.
刪除2. ok.
3. ok.
1.I'm good at work assignment because my experience of being club president.
回覆刪除2.It's meaningful for me to finish the job on time.
3.I always be willing to help others if I've got extra time.
good!
刪除Standing in others shoes is my personality trait. I have a great experience with helping people. I believe that I can take my advantage to bring well-being for the company.
回覆刪除good!
刪除I study in Providence University,Department of English.
回覆刪除I'm outgoing and willing to learn new things.
I like to cooperate with others and listening to others opinions.
good!
刪除1. Being responsible is the most important thing that I think.
回覆刪除2. My hobbies are making friends and learning different languages.
3. I think that I’m a kind person, and I want to keep many pets in the future.
3. pets? what position?
刪除1.I am good at writing.
回覆刪除2.I love to interacted with people.
3.I am studying at Providence university.
good!
刪除1. prove it!
1,I am a person who can help colleagues in their work.
回覆刪除2,I will complete the task assigned by her boss by making her boss satisfied.
3,I won't ask for more than the average salary.
hahaha.....
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1.I love playing the musical instruments.
回覆刪除2.Studying foreign language is a fun thing for me.
3.I'm studying English and Chinese in Providence University.
what position?
刪除Are they (3 sentences) relevant?
I major in English in my college.
回覆刪除I have great patient and I like to do things clearly.
Although I don't have any experience right now ,I willing to learn and do my best.
honest
刪除good
1.I am a doctor of English Department.
回覆刪除2.I will keep a willing heart for my job.
3.I have learned the second language -Japanese.
what position?
刪除Are they (3 sentences) relevant?
1,I am a person who can help colleagues in their work.
回覆刪除2,I will complete the task assigned by her boss by making her boss satisfied.
3,Jillian won't ask for more than the average salary.
高靜文
I study in the Department of English in the university.I am a steady person.I hope to make myself better so I challenge myself every day.
回覆刪除I always think positive when I get in problems with the products.
回覆刪除Some applicants may shy in the meeting.
I want to learn more about English literature in this company.
3. literature? are you sure?
刪除2. What are you trying to indicate?
I major in PU of English Language and Literature.
回覆刪除I’m good at chatting with stranger.
My future plan is study abroad for expand my vision.
what position? can't tell from your sentences.
刪除Dear Sir:
回覆刪除I'm Aurora(田仙雨), I saw on the recruitment website that your company is looking for new employees, I feel that I am competent to meet the requirement.
First, I will be graduating form Xingyi University.
Second, during my education, I have grasped the principals of my major and skills of practice.
In the end, I can work hard, no matter how hard the work. Thank you for your reading.
basically, good!
刪除1. B. A. expected in ........ 預計什麼時候取得學士學位
2. try to be more specific.
3. good!
戴宥萱
回覆刪除1.I think it is important to be a kind person.
2.OCD makes me a better worker.
3.I'm not afraid of challenges,because adversity has the effect of eliciting talents
英一A 方可愉
回覆刪除I major in English. I can learn something quickly, and interact with people smoothly. Also, I’m a responsible person.
very specific
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回覆刪除Firstly, I am Elsa.
I am writing to seek the employment.
I am looking forward for hearing you soon.
for cover letter......ok
刪除but the requests are: three topic sentences.
連于榛
回覆刪除1.I graduated from Providence University and major in English.
2.I had some work experiences like cashier, sales clerk and typist.
3.I like to learn new things and also have enthusiastic at work.
good!
刪除Apply letter for social worker.
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I am a Certified Horticultural Therapist.
Easily communicate with others, since I had many experiences teaching elderly baking, horticultural, painting in the church. Also volunteers in library for over 3 years.
I am a good listener, majored in social work and professional in this area.
楊雅玲
I am interested in knowing more about your experiences of teaching baking, horticulture, and painting in the church. I have the experience of teaching English Bible in the church. . . . .
刪除These are good "Topic sentences."
It is indeed necessary to let us know the position you are going to apply for .....
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回覆刪除1. I major in department of English language and literature.
2. I had some part-time job about this industry.
3. I have a strong interest on this job, that is why I want to get this chance.
2. some?
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