2019年10月8日 星期二

Autobiography: New

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  1. Objective:a part time job in clothes shop.

    1.Family background: My home business is running clothes shops.
    2.Personality: My personality is thoughtful and insightful.
    3.Experience: I often learn with my mom for facing the customers.
    4.Goals&Expectations: I want to be more outgoing so that I can work in clothes shop in the future.

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    1. Objective:clothes store’s manager

      1.Family background: My home business is running clothes shops.
      2.Personality: My personality is thoughtful and insightful.
      3.Experience: I often learn with my mom for facing the customers.
      4.Goals&Expectations: I want to be more outgoing so that I can work in clothes shop in the future.

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  2. Objective:My life
    1.There are 5 members in my family.I have two younger sisters and both of my parents teach me how to become a better person ,I love my family really much.
    2.I'm a optimistic and outgoing person,I will always do my best to help others.
    3.During high school,I've join many clubs and activities, such as dancing club,debate club.I've also be an volunteer to primary school,besides,I've participated in educational trip to Germany.Those experiences not only make me meet many friends but also broaden my horizon.
    4.My future goal is to be an primary school English teacher ,therefore I'll do my best to get 850 on TOEIC and participate in other English contest,I'll also apply for the exchange student in the future.

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  3. Objective: Find a part-time job.
    Family Background: My parents only pay the tuition for me.
    Personality: I will try my best to finish the work I suppose to do and I am also a responsible person.
    Experience: I worked as a spaghetti cook during my summer vacation.
    Goals & Expectations: I hope to earn money by myself and save as much money as I can.

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    1. Objective: Find a part-time job as a waiter.
      Family Background: My parents only pay the tuition for me.
      Personality: I will try my best to finish the work I suppose to do and I am also a responsible person.
      Experience: I worked as a spaghetti cook during my summer vacation.
      Goals & Expectations: I hope to earn money by myself and save as much money as I can.

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  4. Objective: Try my best to change school.

    1. Family background : most of my family members were teachers

    2. Personality : responsible and good at taking care of others.

    3. Experience : Ask teachers about how to prepare and started to practice the test that I’m going to take
    4. Goals & Expectation : study hard while I’m in college and try to change school in the end of the semester

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  5. Objective:A baker which bakery is in Canada.
    1.Family background: My parent is open-minded person.
    2.Personality: I am a agreeable person.
    3.Experience: I travel to a lot of country and experience their cultures.
    4.Goal &Experiences:I wish I can operate my own bakery in Canada.

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  6. Objective English teacher
    1. My father’s favorite subject was English so he encouraged me to learn English well.
    2.I have great patience with children.
    3. I used to be a teaching assistant in Joy English Cram School.
    4.In the future,I want to be an English teacher who could make students love English.

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  7. objective:Work as a salesgirl at a makeup counter.
    Family:My aunty is a makeup artist,she teach me a lot makeuo skills.
    Personality:I'm a pratical,expressive person.It means I can give useful opinions.
    Experience:When I was in highschool,my classmates said my eyebrows looks good.The neighbor class'girl even knew my name because of my eyebrows.
    Goal:I hope I can be a makeup blogger. Share my tips to all the girls and boys whom love makeup.

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  8. Objective:to master a lot of language for my job and hobbies.
    When I was in elementary school, my parents were very strict only for me because I’m the first born children in my family.
    I’m usually though of as a modestly person, but actually I’m very competitive.
    When I was in junior high school, I started playing percussion in brass band and still playing that in university’s brass band now.
    After graduating from university, I will go back to Japan and want to teach Japanese to foreigners in Japanese language school.

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    Objective: An American school’s teacher interview
    1.Family background: My sister is a kindergarten’s teacher.
    2.Personality: I think I’m vivacious to kids.
    3.Experience: I had taught English in cram school for a year that is my part-time job in college.
    4.Goal &Experiences: I hope I can help students to find interests from studying.

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  10. Objective: try to introduce myself for a volunteer interview

    There are four people in my family, my parents,my younger brother and I. I am responsible for taking care of my brother since I was in childhood.

    It gradually makes me become more responsible and thoughtful person.

    I did some part time jobs in my free time after school. In my opinion, I don’t want to gain money from my parents. I know that earning money isn’t easy.

    My expectation is let my family have good living environment and don’t let them down in the future.

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  11. Objective:Catering
    1.Family background :Eating fastfood twice a week
    2.Personality:outgoing and optimistic
    3.Experience:a part-time job in hot pot restaurant in summer vacation.
    4.Goals&Expectations:I hope I can be a restaurant store manager.

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  12. Objective:government employee
    1.My parent don't want me to be so tired like them,so they hope me can have a secure job.
    2.I don't like talking,but I have great patient to help others save their problem.
    3.I don't have any experience about it.Although it's new for me,I still want to give it a try.
    4.l can finish this mission after I graduated.And make myself and my parent satisfied in the end.I don't want them disappointed any more.
    Classmates:林湘淇 王人平 陳虹潓

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  13. Objective:become a musician
    1.My parents cultivate me playing the piano in my youth.
    2.I often become nervous in front of people.
    3.I have attended in some musical contests.
    4.I hope I can overcome my easily-nervous personality, and keep practicing the piano.
    Cassmates:陳欣妤 林湘淇

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  14. Objective:
    I want to apply for Institute of criminology of national Chung Cheng university.

    1. My parents always told me that knowledge is priceless.

    2. I am a eccentric person who can never stop contemplating about something.

    3. In junior high my observation ability in vocational aptitude test got PH 99 as a result.

    4. I want to learn everything I could possibly learn in this school.

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  15. Objective: Be a English tutor teacher
    1.My father manages a printing company with my mother. 
    2.I'm a flexible,responsible and patient person.
    3.I had worked in KFC for 2 years.
    4.I hope I can earn money and travel around.
    Classmates:陳欣妤 陳虹潓 王人平

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    Objective:Work as a translator in a global company.
    1.I am the eldest daughter in my family.I have a younger sister and brother.
    2.I think I am a painstaking and responsible person.
    3.I was a cashier in a hypermarket before. I like to serve foreign customers.
    4.I wish I can qualify this job and handle all problems.

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  17. Objective:being a tour guide
    1.My father likes a trip without plan.
    2.I'm a methodical and calm person.
    3.I like traveling,and I often plan our family trips with my brother .
    4.I hope I can be a guide.
    Classmates:陳欣妤 陳虹潓

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  18. Objective: Become a successful translator
    1. My family are ordinary farmers, but they are all cultured people. And the important things they were very supportive of me no matter what choice I made.
    2. There was no English class in the school in my hometown, and I didn't start to learn English until junior high school, So I study English harder than others.
    3. My major is translation and I have some experience in helping others with their homework.
    4. I hope I can improve my foreign language ability and become a translator in the future.

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  19. Objective: Part-time job in Thai Town
    1. Family Background: my parents just pay my tuition and money for food.
    2. Personality: I consider myself an outgoing and positive person.
    3. Experience: I am good at communicating with people
    4.Goals and Expectations:be the manager of the restaurant

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  20. Objective:Member of the NTSO.
    Family background:My brother and I were forced to learn music and we accidentally got inspired.
    Personality:I am a heavy music lover.
    Experience:I have been the president of wind band in my high school.
    Goal & Expectations:I want to try my best on practicing my ability in music

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  21. Object: Writing a book about self-care

    Background:I am a survivor of cancer for 20 years.

    Personality:I am brave and open-minded to share my story.

    Experience: Regular exercise, art therapy , religion and family support make me Stay Healthy.

    Goal: My illness will be a blessing for others.

    Gina 楊雅玲

    (revised by 戴宥萱)

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  22. 陳沅昊
    10月16日 週三 下午12:22 (2 天前)
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    Objective:Finding a part time job which is related to the drinks and be a salesclerk.

    1.There are six members in my family and I am the youngest.

    2.I am a friendly person so I don’t get much troubles with my friends.

    3.I used to work at my brother’s stand which is sale egg pancake.

    4.I want to learn more details about drinks and maybe I can have my own store one day.

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