1.My parent is open-minded person. 2.I am a agreeable person. 3. I travel to a lot of country and experience their cultures. 4.I wish I can operate my own bakery in Canada.
Objective:Get a part rooms job which is relatives with clothes.
1.Family background: My home business is running clothes shops. 2.Personality: My personality is thoughtful and insightful. 3.Experience: I often learn with my mom for facing the customers. 4.Goals&Expectations: I want to be more outgoing so that I can work in clothes shop in the future.
1. Family background : most of my family members were teachers
2. Personality : responsible and good at taking care of others.
3. Experience : I was a football team player and I’m a key roles inside the team, so I had to lead them to win the competition 4. Goals & Expectation : study hard while I’m in college and try to change school in the end of the semester
Objective: Try to find a part-time job. Family Background: My parents only pay the tuition for me. Personality: I will try my best to finish the work I suppose to do. Experience: I worked as a spaghetti cook during my summer vacation. Goals & Expectations: I hope to earn money for myself and save as much money as I can.
Objective:doing a interview in class 1.There are 5 members in my family.I have to younger sisters and both of my parents teach me how to become a better person ,I love my family really much. 2.I'm a optimistic and outgoing person,I will always do my best to help others. 3.During high school,I've join many clubs and activities, such as dancing club,debate club.I've also be an volunteer to primary school,besides,I've participated in educational trip to Germany.Those experiences not only make me meet many friends but also broaden my horizon. 4.My future goal is to be an primary school English teacher ,therefore I'll do my best to get 850 on TOEIC and participate in other English contest,I'll also apply for the exchange student in the future.
Objective English teacher 1. My father’s favorite subject was English so he encouraged me to learn English well. 2.I have great patience with children. 3. I used to be a teaching assistant in Joy English Cram School. 4.In the future,I want to be an English teacher who could make students love English.
Objective：A work which is related to music. 1.Family Background：I'm the secondary child in my family that my brother and I enjoy music very much. 2.Personality：I'm a sentimental person that can be influenced by many touched music. But I'm also a corky person so it may not be difficult to stay along with me. 3.Experience：I had been a president in Wind Band or also Wind orchestra in my high school. It's pretty hard to deal with everything perfectly but I usually try my best. 4.Goals & Expectations：I wish I can learn something through the job because it's more important to learn something than make money.
1.I was born in a stem family. 2.I am an considerate,cautious person. 3.I have attended some musical competitions. 4.I hope I can find the best study methods suitable for me.
I'm one child in my family. Although my personality is very taciturn,I'm a agreeable and trustful person in my inner heart. I had been in Secretary section in high school English study club. My goal is changing my personality that hope I can become more outgoing and creative.And expectation myself can earn more different skill in this job.
1.My family are make up of four people. My dad, my mom, my younger sister, and me. 2. I'm an active and aggressive person. 3. I have learned English for 15 years. Therefore, English is my expertise and interest. In addition, I have joined Sunny Club during my high school life. 4.My goals in this semester are getting golden certificate in TOEIC and join the department of society and ambassador elite .
Objective:to master a lot of languages. 1.When I was in elementary school, my parents were very strict for me because I'm the first born children in my family. 2.I'm usually thought of as a modestly person, but actually I'm very competitive. 3.When I was in junior high school, I started playing percussion in brassband and still playing that now. 4.In the future, I want to teach Japanese to foreigners.
My objective is to become a ground service in the future. I am the older sister in my family,so that let me become a responsible and independent person. I am a perfectionist because that when I was young, my parents always told me be careful to everything before make it. I was a director of singing club when I'm in high school. My goals and expectation is that I want to get golden certificate from toeic and learn some languages such as Japanese or Korean.
Objective: An American school’s teacher interview 1. My sister is a kindergarten’s teacher. 2. I think I’m vivacious to kids. 3. I had taught English in cram school for a year that is my part-time job in college. 4. I hope I can help students to find interests from studying.
Objective: An American school’s teacher interview 1. My sister is a kindergarten’s teacher. 2. I think I’m vivacious to kids. 3. I had taught English in cram school for a year that is my part-time job in college. 4. I hope I can help students to find interests from studying.
There are four people in my family, my parents,my younger brother and I. I am responsible for taking care of my brother since I was in childhood.
It gradually makes me become more responsible and thoughtful person.
I did some part time jobs in my free time after school. In my opinion, I don’t want to gain money from my parents. I know that earning money isn’t easy.
My expectation is let my family have good living environment and don’t let them down in the future.
Objective: Leading a simple living. 1. I’m the oldest sister in my family, and I have a younger sister. 2. I’m a easygoing person. 3. I’ve learned how to make a proper cup of tea from my dad. 4. I’m pursuing a happy life.
Object : Try to find a part time job 1.My father manages a printing company with my mother. 2.I'm a flexible and responsible person. 3.I had worked in KFC for 2 years. 4.I hope I can earn money and travel around.
Hello,I'm Aurora, I come from Guizhou province, where I have a very ordinary but happy family. There are grandparents, parents, two sisters and a brother. Because of the heavy burden of my parents, I have been doing odd jobs since junior high school to earn some pocket money for myself. I worked as a coolie, a tutor, and a factory worker. I have only one goal all the time, which is to study hard and make a lot of money. I hope I can make my family better in the future.
Objective:Work in a global company 1.I am the eldest daughter in my family,I have a younger sister and brother. 2.I think I am a painstaking and responsible person. 3.I was a cashier in a hypermarket before,and I like to serve foreign customers. 4.I wish I can qualify this job and handle all problems.
There are four people in my family, I have a younger sister, so I am good at taking care of people. I am actually not a outgoing person, but I can observe people or environment subtly. I used to be a club president, it has changed my line of thought into a mature one. I want to be a person who don’t need to depend on others and do what I like, for example, run my own dessert shop.
objective:Get a part job which relatives with makeup My aunty is a makeup artist,she teach me a lot makeuo skills. I'm a pratical,expressive person,it means I can give useful opinions. When I was in highschool,my classmates said :your eyebrows looks good!The neighbor class'girl even knew my name because of my eyebrows. I hope I can be a makeup blogger and share my tips to all the girls and boys whom love makeup.
1.My parent is open-minded person.
回覆刪除2.I am a agreeable person.
3. I travel to a lot of country and experience their cultures.
4.I wish I can operate my own bakery in Canada.
objective?
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刪除Objective:Get a part rooms job which is relatives with clothes.
回覆刪除1.Family background: My home business is running clothes shops.
2.Personality: My personality is thoughtful and insightful.
3.Experience: I often learn with my mom for facing the customers.
4.Goals&Expectations: I want to be more outgoing so that I can work in clothes shop in the future.
objective: be more specific
刪除Objective: Try my best to change school.
回覆刪除1. Family background : most of my family members were teachers
2. Personality : responsible and good at taking care of others.
3. Experience : I was a football team player and I’m a key roles inside the team, so I had to lead them to win the competition
4. Goals & Expectation : study hard while I’m in college and try to change school in the end of the semester
3 and your objective........not consistent
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刪除Objective: Try to find a part-time job.
回覆刪除Family Background: My parents only pay the tuition for me.
Personality: I will try my best to finish the work I suppose to do.
Experience: I worked as a spaghetti cook during my summer vacation.
Goals & Expectations: I hope to earn money for myself and save as much money as I can.
consistent
刪除but better to point out a specific position
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刪除1.I have an older brother.
回覆刪除2.I'm a methodical and calm person.
3.I like traveling,and I often arrange my family trips.
4.I hope I can be a guide.
objective?
刪除Objective:doing a interview in class
回覆刪除1.There are 5 members in my family.I have to younger sisters and both of my parents teach me how to become a better person ,I love my family really much.
2.I'm a optimistic and outgoing person,I will always do my best to help others.
3.During high school,I've join many clubs and activities, such as dancing club,debate club.I've also be an volunteer to primary school,besides,I've participated in educational trip to Germany.Those experiences not only make me meet many friends but also broaden my horizon.
4.My future goal is to be an primary school English teacher ,therefore I'll do my best to get 850 on TOEIC and participate in other English contest,I'll also apply for the exchange student in the future.
Topic sentences?
刪除Objective English teacher
回覆刪除1. My father’s favorite subject was English so he encouraged me to learn English well.
2.I have great patience with children.
3. I used to be a teaching assistant in Joy English Cram School.
4.In the future,I want to be an English teacher who could make students love English.
good and convincing
刪除Objective：A work which is related to music.
回覆刪除1.Family Background：I'm the secondary child in my family that my brother and I enjoy music very much.
2.Personality：I'm a sentimental person that can be influenced by many touched music. But I'm also a corky person so it may not be difficult to stay along with me.
3.Experience：I had been a president in Wind Band or also Wind orchestra in my high school. It's pretty hard to deal with everything perfectly but I usually try my best.
4.Goals & Expectations：I wish I can learn something through the job because it's more important to learn something than make money.
objective. Be more specific.
刪除Your topic sentences are not formal, but i like them.
Objective:
回覆刪除I want to apply for graduate school.
1. My parents always told me that knowledge is priceless.
2. I am a eccentric person who can never stop contemplating about something.
3. I used to attend all kinds of writing or reading contest in my school.
4. I want to learn everything I could possibly learn in this school.
Objective: English?
刪除topic sentences: clear and good
刪除1.I was born in a stem family.
回覆刪除2.I am an considerate,cautious person.
3.I have attended some musical competitions.
4.I hope I can find the best study methods suitable for me.
objective?
刪除I'm one child in my family.
回覆刪除Although my personality is very taciturn,I'm a agreeable and trustful person in my inner heart.
I had been in Secretary section in high school English study club.
My goal is changing my personality that hope I can become more outgoing and creative.And expectation myself can earn more different skill in this job.
objective?
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1.My family are make up of four people. My dad, my mom, my younger sister, and me.
回覆刪除2. I'm an active and aggressive person.
3. I have learned English for 15 years. Therefore, English is my expertise and interest. In addition, I have joined Sunny Club during my high school life.
4.My goals in this semester are getting golden certificate in TOEIC and join the department of society and ambassador elite .
objective?
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蕭彥暘
刪除Objective:to master a lot of languages.
回覆刪除1.When I was in elementary school, my parents were very strict for me because I'm the first born children in my family.
2.I'm usually thought of as a modestly person, but actually I'm very competitive.
3.When I was in junior high school, I started playing percussion in brassband and still playing that now.
4.In the future, I want to teach Japanese to foreigners.
master a lot of languages......?!
刪除My objective is to become a ground service in the future.
回覆刪除I am the older sister in my family,so that let me become a responsible and independent person.
I am a perfectionist because that when I was young, my parents always told me be careful to everything before make it.
I was a director of singing club when I'm in high school.
My goals and expectation is that I want to get golden certificate from toeic and learn some languages such as Japanese or Korean.
convincing
刪除Objective: An American school’s teacher interview
回覆刪除1. My sister is a kindergarten’s teacher.
2. I think I’m vivacious to kids.
3. I had taught English in cram school for a year that is my part-time job in college.
4. I hope I can help students to find interests from studying.
Objective: An American school’s teacher interview
刪除1. My sister is a kindergarten’s teacher.
2. I think I’m vivacious to kids.
3. I had taught English in cram school for a year that is my part-time job in college.
4. I hope I can help students to find interests from studying.
Objective: try to introduce myself
回覆刪除There are four people in my family, my parents,my younger brother and I. I am responsible for taking care of my brother since I was in childhood.
It gradually makes me become more responsible and thoughtful person.
I did some part time jobs in my free time after school. In my opinion, I don’t want to gain money from my parents. I know that earning money isn’t easy.
My expectation is let my family have good living environment and don’t let them down in the future.
on what occasion?
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刪除Objective: Leading a simple living.
回覆刪除1. I’m the oldest sister in my family, and I have a younger sister.
2. I’m a easygoing person.
3. I’ve learned how to make a proper cup of tea from my dad.
4. I’m pursuing a happy life.
objective..........not correct
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Object : Try to find a part time job
回覆刪除1.My father manages a printing company with my mother.
2.I'm a flexible and responsible person.
3.I had worked in KFC for 2 years.
4.I hope I can earn money and travel around.
what position?
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刪除My object is......
刪除Hello,I'm Aurora, I come from Guizhou province, where I have a very ordinary but happy family. There are grandparents, parents, two sisters and a brother.
回覆刪除Because of the heavy burden of my parents, I have been doing odd jobs since junior high school to earn some pocket money for myself. I worked as a coolie, a tutor, and a factory worker.
I have only one goal all the time, which is to study hard and make a lot of money. I hope I can make my family better in the future.
objective?
刪除My object is......
刪除Objective:Work in a global company
回覆刪除1.I am the eldest daughter in my family,I have a younger sister and brother.
2.I think I am a painstaking and responsible person.
3.I was a cashier in a hypermarket before,and I like to serve foreign customers.
4.I wish I can qualify this job and handle all problems.
what position?
刪除use "periods" to separate sentences.
Autobiography
回覆刪除Object: writing a book about self-care
Background: A survivor of cancer.
Personality: Brave ,open-minded and active
Experience: Be healthy through regular exercise , art therapy, religion, and family support.
Goal: illness is a blessing for others.
Please use complete sentences.
刪除There are four people in my family, I have a younger sister, so I am good at taking care of people.
回覆刪除I am actually not a outgoing person, but I can observe people or environment subtly.
I used to be a club president, it has changed my line of thought into a mature one.
I want to be a person who don’t need to depend on others and do what I like, for example, run my own dessert shop.
what is your objective?
刪除Use "periods" to separate sentences.
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objective:Get a part job which relatives with makeup
回覆刪除My aunty is a makeup artist,she teach me a lot makeuo skills.
I'm a pratical,expressive person,it means I can give useful opinions.
When I was in highschool,my classmates said :your eyebrows looks good!The neighbor class'girl even knew my name because of my eyebrows.
I hope I can be a makeup blogger and share my tips to all the girls and boys whom love makeup.
objective.....can't be more specific? such as the position.
刪除teaches, makeup
use a period to separate two sentences.
topic sentences......good!
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